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Old things make me tell tales

PrettySquareGal

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The Picnic, 1953

Letty was 25, but almost 30 in her mind. She had a knack for picking the right hat only to later wear it when meeting the wrong man.

It's not that the men weren't to up her standards (that weren't really hers anyway, but more of what she had as a guide based upon what mother kept telling her). It was that she just didn't FEEL with any of them. It was always somewhat mechanical, methodical and well timed. They showed up on time, said the proper things, and she sometimes even let them kiss her goodnight only because she feared her lips would grow cold and pursed if not pursued once in a while. This was after a well planned dinner in a respectable establishment and maybe a nice movie.

Her flat was cute and her cat looked content being fat and single and it was always the same safe scene with a variety of discounted hats arranged in front of her vanity mirror. They conveniently blocked her view of her own full reflections.

But she was filled with a bit of desperation that one night. She was going to meet Henry at the park in the early afternoon for a picnic before his train departed the following dawn. His job was transferring him to the branch in Ohio, hundreds of miles away from the dreary town of Gray, Maine. His wife would come with him, and close her shop for good.

Henry was married to Letty's boss, a very domineering woman who ran her boutique in a manner that brought in healthy numbers of anemic and overweight rich women in need of fedoras and evening purses.

They had met one evening when Letty was closing shop. Henry had stopped by per his wife's request, but she had forgotten and left early. He offered to walk her to her car and it was one of those times when you find yourself suddenly talking with someone and you don't know their name or where they're from or if you will ever see them again. Of course she knew who he was in relation to her boss, but with this man, she could FEEL his conversation. But to acknowledge the time or that they had reached her car would put an end to the natural connection that existed whether or not they continued to talk, and would be be broken by social graces and passing ladies with fedoras and evening purses giving them the look. His wife was well connected to people she hardly knew.

Henry and Letty had a few more chance encounters, mostly methodically planned and well timed by Henry to appear accidental. Each meeting progressed into something longer and allowed for more acceptance of the fact that they had something. They never spoke of what it was.

But the news that he would be leaving made him lost in his seemingly safe daydreams of a place where they could be together. It would be a picnic in the park...

I just wrote this. I saw a vintage picnic set in a small carrying case at an estate auction today, and I wondered about the people who had used it.

Does anyone else get inspired to make up stories about old things?
 

PrettySquareGal

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Zohar said:
I don't usually do this, but I'll be glad to keep reading it if you do.

Oh! A reader. Wonderful! See, I've had some awful writer's block the last few months, but when I get around old things my mind gets cranked and I didn't make the connection until today. I used to dismiss my fanciful thinking as just that. Then I thought, why not go with it and use it to get writing again?

I'll send you any new vignettes. :)
 

MrNewportCustom

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Keep posting them, dear. I've just spent the last thirty minutes dredging the dark, dank bottom of the hard drive, looking for one I wrote about an old racing bike (old enough to have wood rims) found hidden behind an attic wall in an old house in the countryside. It was kind of mystical in that the speaker could ride the bike with no problems, but couldn't ride any other bike without it falling out from underneath him.

I wanted to post it here, but unfortunately I seem to have lost it. :(


Lee
 

Gilbey

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I like your creativity, PrettySG! I'm not a writer myself but I do get sentimental when I see old things, especially old photographs of eras gone by. Keep on writing girl! :)
 

PrettySquareGal

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MrNewportCustom said:
Keep posting them, dear. I've just spent the last thirty minutes dredging the dark, dank bottom of the hard drive, looking for one I wrote about an old racing bike (old enough to have wood rims) found hidden behind an attic wall in an old house in the countryside. It was kind of mystical in that the speaker could ride the bike with no problems, but couldn't ride any other bike without it falling out from underneath him.

I wanted to post it here, but unfortunately I seem to have lost it. :(


Lee

Oh no! Maybe you can still find it! (I never thought of my hard drive as having a medieval dungeon before! :) )
 

PrettySquareGal

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Gilbey said:
I like your creativity, PrettySG! I'm not a writer myself but I do get sentimental when I see old things, especially old photographs of eras gone by. Keep on writing girl! :)

Thank you, Gilbey. :) Maybe you can write about one of those pictures sometime anyway! I think sentimentality is too easily dismissed as sap.
 

Nashoba

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so how does it end?
I'm horrible, I know. I'm the kind of person who wants to know what they did after they lived happily ever after.....
You're not alone though. I've often looked at old objects and wondered the same thing. Especially old dresses and ball gowns. I've never put pen to paper about it, but I've definately imagined what the people who may have had it were like.
 

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